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Trojan :)

[Beach monsters concept art]

OMG I love game mockups! my favourites are the coral monster, the octopus and the big crab. What I really like about the last two is how the charcater design implies interesting game mechanics (I think that units which take up several tiles can lead to interesting strategies), hope to see more of that from you!

[The Skull Kid]

Nice work! the only things that bug me are the lack of shading on the gun and the color pallette.
Try using Higher contrast between the two greys on the pants, and shift the hue a little between the two yellows in the shirt (higher contrast there too). After doing this, you could try to replace the black of the inner outlines to a darker shade of the color of that area

EDIT: I see an unhappy reaction. Sorry if it came out as preachy, I didn't mean to discredit your work. Maybe my suggestions dont really fit with what you were going for. I'm gonna add an half star for encouragement
༼ つ ◕_◕ ༽つ★
(and also a ticket for a free roast as soon as I dare to post pixel art here on newgrounds)